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The Sound of Meaning

The sound of Meaning Wailing emotions Whimpers with grief At Logic’s intentions The sound of Purpose Whistling to dance Spits in the face Of theorized Chance The sound of Judgment Thunders with treason Struggles to balance Logic and Reason The sound of Fate Laughs and cries Gets to decide Truth from Lies The sound of Liberty Throats are sore Strongly resembles The sound of War The sound of War Snickers at Judgment For human Logic Serves punishment The sound of Logic Deafening with hate Easily dispatches of Purpose and Fate The sound of Meaning Wailing emotions Whimpers with grief At Logic’s intentions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2009 10:06:00 AM
Excellent writing Gael! Congrats on having this fine poem featured
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:04:00 AM
wow, nicely done, great use of words, great expression. Congrats on the feature! Izzy.
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:01:00 PM
Very well written piece that is full of well expressed thought - wonderful job on this - Congrats on being featured - God bless, mj
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 7:23:00 AM
Congatulations Gael on "The Sound of Meaning" being featured this week. Will mankind ever learn? We hear only what we want. Logic seldom plays a part but Greed and hunger for power overshadow it when it does. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:53:00 AM
Excellent! Love the flow, love the rhythm, love the message, love IT! Lots of thought in this and I love how you ended with the beginning, like it reflects back unto itself and really wraps up the whole piece. Very nice use of phrasing and imagery here, well-deserving of being featured this week. Love, Amy
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Date: 2/9/2009 1:44:00 PM
Awesome messages here and one to ponder with more than one readding!! Very well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup. Congratulations, Gael !!
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:49:00 AM
Wonderful use of words! Flowing greatly to the image you have imprinted! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:09:00 PM
This strong verbs work well. Nice use of personification and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/5/2009 11:52:00 AM
this was a concerned write and feels like it directed to humanity. enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:46:00 AM
Good meaning and flow, nice use of metophor, well written, thanks for sharing. Judy Riley
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Date: 1/5/2009 12:43:00 AM
This is wonderful, each stanza so short and to the point. Sometimes the fewer the words the louder the message. Laurie
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Date: 1/4/2009 9:02:00 PM
Thank you for welcoming me and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^.^
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Date: 1/4/2009 8:59:00 PM
Whew! ...quite the piece of philosophy here. So well constructed... rhymes are great. This one will bear repeated readings! BRAVO Gael, and welcome to the Soup! Best wishes, Keith
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