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The Song of the Sumicles My Boat

Almost weightlessly you glide across the waves, with the wind our friend and foe. Using nature as the power of our ways, hoping the waves stay low. The mast cracks and screeches, when the wind shows her fury. Then you wish for beaches. SUMICLES my boat you are anything but dreary.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/9/2016 2:00:00 PM
well done. great description. LINDA
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Tristan Tupper
Date: 1/9/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 1/9/2016 8:04:00 AM
Excellent write, like the comparison of soft and rough waves, to her emotions. Skat
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Tristan Tupper
Date: 1/9/2016 1:59:00 PM
Thanks SKAT.
Date: 1/9/2016 2:39:00 AM
beautiful write Tristan... a nice boat there
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Tristan Tupper
Date: 1/9/2016 2:50:00 AM
Thank you again for all the support it means a lot!

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