The Snow Fell Down
Become a
Premium Member
and post notes and photos about your poem like Sandra Haight.
.gif deer)
The snow fell down- like feathers, flew,
and clung to everything that grew.
Each branch and twig was fluffed with white-
highlighted 'neath the moon's soft light.
Serene this vision, I saw through.
The snow fell down- like feathers, flew.
A white-lace haze of snowflakes made
an opaque patterned window shade.
And through that shade, I saw a deer
beneath the glow of moon so clear.
The snow fell down- like feathers, flew-
but falling faster blocked my view.
Now I, behind my window, warm
and safe from this cold winter storm,
prayed hard the deer find comfort too.
The snow fell down- like feathers, flew.
January 25, 2016
~2nd Place~
Contest: Opaque
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 11/28/2019
~1st Place~
Contest: Show Me Quatern Poetry
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Judged: 02/06/2016
~6th Place~
Premiere Contest: Contest 208
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 09/21/2016
Copyright © Sandra Haight | Year Posted 2016
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.
Please
Login
to post a comment