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The Sittee River

The Sittee River Tumbling down from the magnificent Maya Mountains, The rabid Sittee River rushed headlong, Over-flooding its banks and the giant mangroves On its long journey to the open Caribbean Sea. Once forest green, the River’s color was now a dirty brown. Hundreds of floating logs all rafted and chained together Like creeping caterpillars lined up on a dead leaf. These lumbering mahogany logs, once majestic living trees Would be transformed mostly into polished furniture. Attention captured by this rambling rapidly roving River, As a child I sat at my window wondering, What other dark secrets did this wandering River hold? Could it reveal the life of the ancient Mayas, other civilizations, or more? I may never know. Today the old beautiful River is clear and bitingly cold, Keenly listening – Vigilantly watching - Waiting for new adventures to unfold! Note: As a child, I grew up in the Sittee River Village in Central America, and this is one of my earliest memories of the River.

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Date: 5/20/2018 3:09:00 PM
O the story of greed, destruction, fake NEED for mahogany furniture - when we have so many alternatives. Thanks for sharing your childhood years KNOWING the Sittee River. May such rivers & mountains outlast our species, but I still bow to God's will: He says humans are His most valuable "creation." Paz/Gracias
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Date: 3/2/2015 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Kika!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/5/2015 7:48:00 PM
Dr. Sharma, thank you for taking the time to send me your kind words! Have a great week ahead! Kika
Date: 3/1/2015 7:58:00 PM
Kika, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:47:00 PM
Hi SKAT A, sorry I haven't responded before as I have been very sick. Thank you for giving me a place on your winners list! That meant a lot to me! Kika
Date: 7/5/2014 2:25:00 PM
This is so wonderfully descriptive made me think of Wordsworth :)
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/6/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thanks very much for visiting and commenting on my poem! I really appreciate the sweet compliments and I am so flattered by the reference to the great Wordsworth:-)! Best wishes!
Date: 7/4/2014 8:10:00 PM
How strange is that, last night I watched a film on the Mayan tribes and then I go and read your poem when I got up, I agree wholeheartedly with that beautiful piece you have written, we have the same problem over here, with rivers drying up and bush coming down to make room for housing estates, great write Kika, welcome to the site, take care...........Vera........
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/6/2014 3:41:00 PM
Hi Vera, thank you for your sweet welcome! I really appreciate your comments and great compliments. I am also happy that you had a chance to get some background on the Mayas and can identify with the plight of our rivers. Have a wonderful day! Kika
Date: 7/4/2014 1:47:00 PM
wonderful write Kika,lovely memories
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/4/2014 1:52:00 PM
Hi Richard, many thanks for visiting and thank you so very much for your sweet compliments. Kika
Date: 7/3/2014 3:12:00 PM
that is deep ..adorable writing piece kika ! N Thank-you so much for commenting on my poem .. honestly i 'd lost hope and wasn't looking forward to upload more . once again thank-you so much ... hina :-)
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/4/2014 1:51:00 PM
Hi Hina, I am so glad to hear from you and to know that I encouraged you by the comments I left. You are truly gifted and please continue to roll out those great poems that I am looking forward to read! Kika
Date: 6/30/2014 1:49:00 PM
Beautiful, nice write enjoyed reading.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/1/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Richard. I'm glad you like this piece.
Date: 6/30/2014 9:09:00 AM
This is really lovely, I look forward to reading more from your pen, thanks for the wonderful comment on my poem ... love Jayne x
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Kika Ayala
Date: 6/30/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Jayne for your visit and great compliment! Have a wonderful day!
Date: 6/29/2014 10:59:00 AM
Hi Kika, this is a wonderful write with great imagery. Thank you for sharing this gem of your childhood memories of your beloved river. Bravo!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/4/2014 2:30:00 PM
Hi Pandita, Thank you for your comments and sweet compliments which I appreciate. Kika

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