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The Sirens

It is said that there is an island in the midst of a fog-shrouded sea Where there are mystical creatures, which no mortal man has seen; Creatures that sing so enchantingly that they entrance all those who hear; Creatures that sing with such longing that they banish all memories and fear; Songs that lure ships to their dark death against the rocks and the crags; Songs that lure crews to their last breaths, to be food for fish and for crabs. It is said that a ship of Achaeans sailed past this forsaken shore; Sailed past this fog-shrouded island as its crew returned home from the war. Odysseus sailed past this island in the midst of a vast lonely sea; Sailed past the legended island where the Sirens were once said to be. And Odysseus said he would hear it, he’d hear the Sirens’ dread song, And ordered his crew to bind him, fast to the mast tight and strong. Then the ears of the crew were deafened with wax And they rowed with their arms and they rowed with their backs; Rowed hard and rowed fast till the danger was past; They rowed till their hearts nearly collapsed. And when they were safe and they asked what he’d heard, Odysseus wept but spoke not a word. He could only look back towards the island Where the song of the Sirens he’d heard. Odysseus alone returned to his home over the white sea foam. Gave up his wild sea-faring life, lived quiet with son and with wife. But every night for the rest of his life, as Odysseus lay in his bed, He heard the song of the Sirens, he still heard their song in his head. He heard the song still and he ached to be on that distant, fog-shrouded island In the midst of the vast lonely sea.

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Date: 7/9/2017 7:51:00 PM
This is GREAT, Jerome! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 7/11/2017 11:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot. And congratulations on your win.
Date: 7/9/2017 6:51:00 PM
Congrats Jerome, for your WIN with such a wonderful piece in the contest! ;-)
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 7/13/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thank you. And congrats on your win with your great poem.
Date: 7/9/2017 4:42:00 PM
The Sirens sing your song, Jerome...Congrats!!! on the win...all the best...^WW^
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 7/12/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you. Congratulations on you win; I enjoyed it.
Date: 12/27/2016 7:35:00 PM
Lorelei was a siren who intentionally lured bewitched sailors to their doom by singing the loveliest song they had ever heard. That legend probably came from your tale. When I visited the Rhine I was intrigued by that fable. I enjoyed your poem very much Jerome! Congratulations on your placement in this short list. ; ) 7
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Date: 12/27/2016 7:31:00 PM
Your story reminds me of a woman named Lorelei in Germany’s Rhine River Valley that dates back several centuries. According to legend, many boats lie at the bottom of the Rhine River because of her. As the legend goes, in the narrowest and deepest point of the Rhine there once was a woman of such beauty that she would cause sailors to wreck their ships as they sailed the dangerous currents along the river’s jagged shorelines.cont.
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Date: 12/27/2016 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Jerome on your top ten placement with your classic tale of Odysseus. Enjoyed the tale as you represented it in form and word.
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Date: 10/12/2016 8:13:00 AM
Yo are a good story teller.
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 10/12/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 10/11/2016 5:33:00 AM
Jerome..a lovely piece you have penned here.. reminds me of a young me reading the book Odysseus, very captivating read.. you excel in this piece. //Blessings
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 10/11/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 10/11/2016 3:05:00 AM
WOW!!! This is awesome mate...Haunting. /|\
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 10/11/2016 3:08:00 AM
Thanks.

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