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The Silver Swan

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Palatial; zephyrs spring tide winds gently blowing in... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Greeting the dawning of elegant twilights, sweet farewell * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * As colourful banners sway amid its summer breeze kiss ~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * A chorus lines reflection; gazing atop the golden pristine pond * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Lovely ballerina's pirouetting about its perfect waters * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Preparing to grace poetics mirrored stage; her sunsets encore... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ...“The Silver Swan” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/6/2011 1:55:00 PM
Beautifully written with great imagery God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 12/4/2011 7:25:00 AM
My darling, your words are more beautiful than my dreams x
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Date: 11/14/2011 9:33:00 PM
Before I drift off to la-la land...quick goodnight to you my dear...I will dream of elegant swans...luv shannon
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Date: 11/2/2011 4:20:00 PM
I do love swans ;} thank you for the sweet comment on "She walks" my friend posted a pic,, of a lady in black, in cemetery ,with roses. I wrote the line She walks between this world and that....... she comes back with tell me more ;} so I wrote !
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Date: 10/28/2011 5:46:00 PM
Beautiful images make me want to get up and dance in this facinating place you describe Sarah - need to thank you for your sweet visit too. Lizzy
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Date: 9/5/2011 1:15:00 PM
nature is beautiful. every moment is worth capturing. truly a great write ~Always&Forever
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:57:00 PM
your words so grace us with all your lov,,, and the story of a summer breeze kiss in its, sunset is so enjoyable,,,,thank you always....
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Date: 6/5/2011 11:33:00 AM
such an emotive , intricate piece sarah! simply amazing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:55:00 PM
Reads like a very relaxing time at the beach..Enjoyed the very poetic work..Thanks for the review of my work "Permanently Stained"..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
thank you for reading and commenting on Moon Glowing.
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:56:00 AM
Hi Sarah thank you for all your comments on my poetry, but i shall be leaving deleting all my poetry, i thought this was a lovely site but you always get one so il say goodbye and good luck with all your writing Love Dawn Thank you x
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 6/4/2011 11:13:00 AM
Sorry i forgot to say Beautiful poem x Smiles
Date: 6/3/2011 8:25:00 PM
wow! S.S.~ you are amazing, and this poem is going to my favorite.. for more reasons than one. Well I will share one thing with you, if you only new how fascinating and exotic in a beautiful way your poetry is. How I wish I was Unique like you. I swear how do you do it?? I bet you won't share your secret with me. I'm gonna leave with the title at hand,.."SILVER SWAN!" says it all.... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:38:00 PM
very well put together ,
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:49:00 AM
Beautiful Sarah @)
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:31:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:42:00 AM
a most dear and beautiful created piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Glow Worm in Love.
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