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The Silent Space Nighttime Musing

I embraced the silent space, In a moment caressed. Rhythm from the saxophone a gift, to the fluidity of her movement. Perfection gave life's breath, to melted candles and sensual eyes. When beauty came to a pause, so my eyes could feast on her alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/3/2016 9:10:00 AM
Wonderful write, Frederic. Love the first line!
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:02:00 PM
FREDERIC, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:57:00 AM
Well-deserved win! Congratulations!!!
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:12:00 AM
Wow a much deserved first place win Frederic with this sensual write.. big congrats!!
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on #1 win!
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:18:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Frederic. Congratulations- a worthy topster. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:00:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on a 1st place win!
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:29:00 PM
so beautiful, Frederic!! BIG congrats on your win with this sensuous writing.
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Date: 12/28/2015 3:25:00 PM
"when passion steps aside - beauty reigns" Congrats on the top spot Frederic - a deserved placement.
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic on your fine win in this contest, well done.
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:03:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Frederic...a most worthy top winner...congratulations! ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:59:00 PM
wonderful musings Frederic congrats on your first place win:-) hugs Jan xx
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