Get Your Premium Membership

The Silence of Winter

Invisible hands will thaw the frozen year If only sun could do the same For the silent pair who sit in stilted air... The two, who ride the transit bus, Going here and there.... Sadly,... who knows where?.....And sadder still, is do they care? With a winter's chill between them, stripped and bare She wears a cloak of tweed to keep her warm He braves the cold hunched in a coat of brown I see them there and wonder how it came to this How silence breeds, while they have passed through years.. They board as two, a married couple, yes But winter chills their very depth Their eyes are vacant, nothing left Of spring, of love, togetherness When distance looms across the room Where love once bloomed, but now is gone Observed among a crowded bus Or in the small café No words are left to say? No hands to grasp, no questions asked No tender glance, don’t touch… don’t touch I wonder how it came to be? These two who vowed to always love Do seasons come and leave such dust When winter’s wind turns love to rust? And winter’s breath chill hearts to stone They live as one, yet stare alone It isn’t hate, it isn’t love, it isn’t care, it isn’t much…. Just the icy, slippery grip of time .....and a deadly winter's touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 8/4/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Carrie and good luck!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 10:15:00 AM
Carrie, Good Luck! Congratulations on your worthy poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 4:15:00 AM
Superb writing, dear Carrie. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2011 9:29:00 AM
congratulatins on your featured poem this week, just lovey~~
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations, this is a fab poem!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2011 5:35:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on this sad write being featured. It is an all too true look at many lives, written so well. Vince
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congrats on the selection, Carrie. After last winter, this is so true - depression sets in. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2011 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2011 9:41:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on PS.. an amazingly beautiful piece to share with us all with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/19/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/19/2011 12:18:00 AM
Superbly descriptive writing, Carrie. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this entry.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 11:56:00 PM
Wow, such profoundness here, also maybe a message for all, as one battles age and each winter that goes with it. wonderful read this poem is, congrats on a deserved winner. Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 7:59:00 PM
many congrats for this win dear friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Chris, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 4:36:00 PM
Oh Carrie, this is one of my favorites..what a sensitive and wonderful write. Just what I always expect from you. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 2:12:00 PM
yike a barn burning wrap up with rhyme for emphasis!!! I hope this is not you? Great write as always. Light & Love [a fan]
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 2:05:00 PM
This is another different take on the challenge, Carrie-- such a sad but very fitting metaphor you used here--you never cease to amaze me with your talent and this is another wonderful example-- Super Congrats to you! hugs--nikko :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 1:05:00 PM
Dear Carrie, once again, I enjoyed this and read it twice! Congratulations on a well deserved win! Enjoy it! Love, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 12:01:00 PM
Carrie, love your attention on love, "Congratulations on your honored fourth place win." Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 10:20:00 AM
Very well written, Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 9:22:00 AM
shimmering, carrie.. your fine wordplay deserves such FINE WIN in the contest.. APPLAUSE! :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on another amazing win in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry ...enjoy with luv.. super ...
Login to Reply
12

Book: Shattered Sighs