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The Shroud

O my Lord I try and understand as I gaze upon your shroud where you became a being of light ascending to heaven upon a cloud... I see bloodstained image of crucified man who wore crown on thorns upon His head a face of such peaceful slumber every pain you suffered can be read.. O my Lord much like you love has left me crucified I wear my own crown of thorns I search for love and have been denied.. I see the face of death's giving true I have loved and lost send me a woman among the living my arms around her spread like a cross.. Lead me out of this garden tomb alone in my bed of impregnated linen praying for love and my sins forgiven and a love to be forever shrouded in Turin.. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 2/19/2014 3:16:00 PM
wow, this is so special! I just love that line where you said: my arms around her spread like a cross. A very interesting image!! Unique poetry , my friend.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 2/19/2014 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading this one Andrea and the awesome comment!
Date: 2/8/2014 9:51:00 AM
Very, very beautiful. I do hope God sends you what you need. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Ken Carroll
Date: 2/8/2014 11:16:00 AM
Gracias por leer Lucilla!
Date: 1/29/2014 4:21:00 PM
amazing poetry
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Harry!
Date: 1/28/2014 8:20:00 PM
A very clever write. I have doubts about the authenticity of the Shroud. Carbon dating has shown that it is only about seven hundred years old.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/28/2014 8:22:00 PM
Hi Robert, Thanks for stopping by..
Date: 1/28/2014 4:50:00 AM
WOW.....You took the Shroud of Turin and used to as a symbol of the lasting imprints of your love. This is a fascinating write......with so many levels of meaning. Good job, Ken.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/28/2014 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Eileen..Much appreciated my friend!

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