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The Shortest Poem I Have Ever Written

Pay Day Wayhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

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Old Buck

Date: 8/9/2015 3:54:00 PM

Jan: Was scouting through a few of your older works and ran across this fine specimen. Very creative. Most of my readers would prefer mine be a little shorter. :o) oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2015 3:58:00 PM

I like to vary the length of my poems I find people don't tend to read the longer ones unless you grab their attention from the very first line - thanks for all your support i do appreciate it. if you would like to hear my voice please go to my 'poem' of 5th August where there is a link to the Manx radio programme where tthe story of my poetry journey was aired last week:-) hugs jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 3/13/2015 8:54:00 AM

Roy might re-quote his "lipstick on a pig" phrase if you do. :) Hugs, Julia

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 9:00:00 AM

Oh I do love that saying lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 3/13/2015 8:49:00 AM

You can now beat your own record by taking out one of the "y's". Hugs, Julia, xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 8:50:00 AM

Oh I could re post it for Roy's contest lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/15/2015 8:36:00 AM

That's it?!!!!! LMAO Why not? Makes perfect sense. *S* Cynthia

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2015 9:38:00 AM

LOl - it rhymes - its a poem lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/24/2014 7:49:00 AM

short- yes. to the ever-loving point. yes.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/24/2014 11:58:00 AM

And it rhymes - even better ... best day of the month and mine is tomorrow! Hugs Jan xxx

Jenny Brewer

Date: 2/14/2014 4:39:00 PM

My fave. xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2014 4:43:00 PM

My fave day too thank you Jenny xxxxxx Jan

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/14/2014 10:20:00 AM

Go to town and get everything you need.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2014 10:41:00 AM

I live on a little Island not on the UK mainland called the Isle of Man so shopping not big on my list of priorities lol. Got to pay to get my son through university that's more important to me jan x Jan

Skat A

Date: 2/13/2014 7:32:00 PM

hahhahahah yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy LOL... I love this short poem. Just like payday, goes and comes... Well, until next payday, let's see another one of these.... Cute by the way... Not what I expected. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2014 4:35:00 AM

I did say it was short! It's the most important day of the month lol Jan xxxx