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The Sherlock

Stealthily, he observes his subject, often in disguise. Habitually, he delves into the opium world, to explore. Eyes darting, ever alert to details, however insignificant. Restless, often bored, his intelligence is prodigious. Loves the thrill of the chase, an unrepentant risk taker. Obsessive, compulsive, Watson can't keep up with him. Closet homosexual tendencies, obscured and obtuse. Kinetic, his energy propels him onward, until crime is solved. Written on 5/20/2015

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Skat A

Date: 6/15/2015 7:22:00 PM

nice win

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win:)

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/14/2015 3:08:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis! I appreciate you stopping by with your kind words :)

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/26/2015 12:10:00 PM

This describes Sherlock very well! He is one of my all time favourite characters, so excellent choice. I like that you have lots of action in poem as well.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2015 12:44:00 PM

Thank you, Isaiah! We loved watching the BBC series of Sherlock Holmes with actor Jeremy Pitt (?) and I even named our yellow lab Sherlock!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/21/2015 4:18:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/21/2015 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi. A appreciate you stopping by to read my poem :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/21/2015 3:46:00 AM

Excellent write dear Laura...I enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for share this beautiful piece........Afolabi.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/21/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi, for your comments. I appreciate it!