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The Secret of Life

Traced undated thoughts Conversed deepest life's questions Ageless wit surmount Mind traversed within Whilst vibrant colors made hue Gently asked questions Embraced each other Radiating every facet Life's truest secret.

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Samiha Zubair

Date: 8/29/2015 4:44:00 AM

Nicely jotted down about life's secrets.

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/15/2014 2:22:00 AM

Discovering life's truest secret means one has finally achieved wisdom. Congratulations if you did, humbly trying to get there, myself...This piece is great kabayan! New friend, Kim Patrice :)

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 11/15/2014 2:27:00 AM

Yes my friend! I already found the only secret of life. One of the rich and famous here in our country asked me that question. She was delighted with my answer! Thanks for dropping by.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2014 4:16:00 AM

- Marvin, a really well written Haiku - I like to write Haiku poems me too - Many think that it is an easy way to write poems on ..... but, I'm not agree - Thank you my friend - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2014 4:35:00 AM

- True !!! :)))

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 10/26/2014 4:33:00 AM

Yes Anne Lise. Many thought its simple but you need miles to travel before writing it. Thanks for dropping bye!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2014 7:03:00 AM

beautiful vision painted

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 10/2/2014 10:46:00 AM

Great thanks Liam!