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They start out in youth as marionettes, often as their own puppeteers, clasping unseen crossed sticks with unseen wires attached, sometimes getting twisted in their own strands. Once people get past the adolescent plagues unique to to them, they find the way to tilt the guide - pulling shoulders straighter with their hidden puppet strings as insecurities dissolve and slowly, foolhardiness recedes. Joining the throng of all the puppeteers, some become masters at their craft, manipulating others, while some prefer to simply play the role of marionette. But everyone at one time or another works the strings. . . When people learn the “secret” embracing life and losing woodenness. . . they grow to understand it’s not obligatory , nor is it even wise, always to make sure the guiding, unseen threads remain untangled. Revised for the People poetry Contest of Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 6/15/2018 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. You never cease to amaze me. This is an amazing poem about people. Excellent.
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:56:00 AM
Congrats on you win with this beauty Andrea! Enjoyed your poem!
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea for your win. Very insightful.
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Date: 6/10/2018 10:00:00 PM
Very insightful piece into the nature of people! Excellently written! Congratulations, Andie on your win! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
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Date: 6/10/2018 5:01:00 PM
Excellent write, Andrea, congratulations on a very well deserved win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/10/2018 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in "People" contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:28:00 PM
Great job, Andrea. This poem touches many of the emotions I wrote about in my "Blind Regret" that you commented on. Sincere congrats on your win. Dan C ps. Regarding your question about her still being with me...No, she is not. I even tried to court her over again, but she filed for divorce from me after 4 yrs of marriage. Don't feel too badly for me, my second wife and I have been together for almost 35 years. One door may close, but another always opens. I was just young and fooolish
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:42:00 AM
You did an awesome write for John's contest and won. Congrats. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Andrea smile wonderful freeverse ... love Jayne
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:45:00 AM
Coming back here to congratulate you, Andrea ^_^ --awesome win for this awesome free verse! super hugs!!
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:45:00 AM
btw was just having fun with that Senryu-- offered to put up an "ad" for Wilma aka siren-- I think you called her that first ;) & zim dollars is something that I got from her (she says it's practically worthless or something, hope my memory is right!) & 30-45 is actually the age range for that "King Triton" that she's searching for ;) --if you find him, send him my way first ok-- I'm the "sunlight" over there-- haha ;) hugs nikko :)
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:55:00 PM
Many congratulations Andrea for this win. Knew it was a winner.
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations to you on your fine win Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest dear Andrea. All the best, iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:41:00 PM
Warm congratulations to you on your wonderful win, Andrea! Beautiful one! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:41:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win in John's contest! I knew this poem would be in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:26:00 AM
"Good precept Andrea." Through 'unseen thread' we have a power in life that no man can gainsay, if we will keep it untangled! "Congratulations' I see you are third place." Smile, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your 3rd place win in John's contest with these lovely words so poignant my friend.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:19:00 AM
Awesome write, Andrea, enjoyed the read! And best of luck for John's contest!...Gert:)
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:04:00 PM
Well done!!! Adrea, this is the reason your in my Fav. list....luv Michael
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:20:00 PM
Awesome entry Andrea.. good luck in John's contest .. a great challenging one.. and u have met it with this marvelous piece..my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:12:00 AM
You have so beautifully described life. Yhe beauty of life is in its unpredictablity. Thanks for your comments dear friend. I run a business of chocolates. I make all kinds from simple to bouquets.
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