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The Scent of Water

The scent of water makes him travel in the desert fast In the last lap of his destination to the oasis For his growing thirst is making him aghast The scent of water makes him travel in the desert fast Sight of greens beyond dunes pulling him up to the last For water is life renewed on an elemental basis The scent of water makes him travel in the desert fast In the last lap of his destination to the oasis. At the oasis, he would drink water to his fulfillment And rested, would breathe in the scent of water For he needs to travel miles in life desert per His indictment At the oasis, he would drink water to his fulfillment Anticipating to meet fellow travelers, can’t hide excitement For sharing pains ‘n joys is renewing on his platter At the oasis, he would drink water to his fulfillment And rested, would breathe in the scent of water. Date: 9.7.2014

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Date: 7/12/2014 8:42:00 PM
You did a great job in this outstanding poem and form my dear friend Mohan. A winner for me. Thank u so much for sharing. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 12:37:00 AM
Leonora, thanks for visiting again and appreciating. Mohan
Date: 7/9/2014 4:56:00 PM
Mohan an excellent write and you accomplished the form very well...David
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Date: 7/12/2014 9:40:00 AM
David Thanks for appreciating. Mohan
Date: 7/9/2014 9:24:00 AM
difficult form neatly accomplished.
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Date: 7/12/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thanks John for your appreciation. Mohan

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