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The scene of school

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The scene of school

Saw in school, the scene I said,
Sooth in scene, I said it shade,
Vital is green but over is red,
How in deep, the nature has made,
Beauty is soul, off all is dead,
World was worse, if off was lead
 Life is not, if don't is add,
Superb is this,what the above said,
never seen a man, like he is mad.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2010 10:16:00 PM
    I forgot to mention, I quite enjoyed this line! "Superb is this,what the above said, never seen a man, like he is mad."

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 10:15:00 PM
    Interesting... it's a bit confusing though. Keep it up!