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The Royal the Regal Vs the Poet's Own Realm

Of splendid thrones of gold Of treasures manifold Of Sultans and Shahs Of Emirs and Rajahs Of jewelled caskets or lavish banquets Of sparkling crowns and flowing gowns Of kings and queens Rulers and emperors Of their subservient stewards and obedient butlers Or the servile knaves and stalwart squires Of the peons and minions pages and pavilions Of castles and palaces of abounding gold and silver in ostentatious regal splendour Ah the fanning maids in waiting Yet to me one thing worth more noticing The poet minstrels who came to sing from afar for the queen and king For I'd rather be a poet for kings so to my tunes swayed the kingdom than I be the king of mere subjects and be filled with regal boredom! So I could join ranks of troubadours and sing for the king some folklores For words are the heart of imagination Inviting to poetic fascination. (form Troubadour) Ars poetica

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Date: 6/9/2015 12:16:00 PM
congratulations
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:28:00 PM
SZK, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/17/2014 7:20:00 AM
Great observation of the troubadour which I have always believed is a noble station in life. We have a grand opportunity in life to speak to the hearts of people, to bring them to a higher place. You have brought that across very well in this poem and it was a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for you comment on my poem.... Robert.
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Date: 9/16/2014 3:53:00 PM
Beautiful piece - well written! Congratulations, my friend on a wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 9/14/2014 2:14:00 PM
beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2014 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations for your outstanding poem.
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win. The flowing expressions, zaynub
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Date: 2/8/2014 6:17:00 PM
The line-breakage in the poem sang a dervish with etched delight. Great write.
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Date: 11/28/2013 1:45:00 PM
Very lovely imagery, it is a very driven down style in this poem, S.zaynub
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:30:00 PM
Read this through twice trying to see what you left out, I failed! It is a lovely write. A poets eye is all seeing . God Bless. D.
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:45:00 PM
I heard that last part very well nice poem
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Date: 6/6/2013 9:40:00 AM
Poets need more recognition. We are the dangerous ones that see through and behind the facades. We have harnessed the power of words. Love how this flows. You may be able to alter the line breaks by back spacing and then hold shift and enter where you want your line break to be.
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Date: 5/4/2013 2:39:00 PM
beneath the trappings all men remain the same, for God is not a respecter of wealth but rather right hearts. A very thought provoking piece.
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Date: 4/28/2013 10:20:00 AM
Wow! That's a great poem...
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Date: 4/21/2013 11:11:00 AM
Very nice... Terry
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Date: 4/17/2013 2:24:00 AM
That's the glory of being a craftsman of words. You get to make your own universe however you see fit. I like your lofty descriptions of sovereignty and how too much luxury leads to laziness and lack of adventure. Much enjoyed reading this! However I'm not sure if I like or dislike the way your format your poems... with 1 to 3 words in each line. Maybe it's the lazy side of me that has to constantly click the scroll button on my mouse... LOL!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 4/17/2013 12:06:00 PM
Oh u know i write in another format always with enuf normal word count but when i hav postd it changes to dis style format which i don like myself. Thanx n cheers.
Date: 4/16/2013 8:14:00 AM
The kings would adore your poetry....terrific write! Hugs
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:35:00 PM
Nice. It also inspire me to write more. Looking forward for your next poems. Thank you for reading mine as well. I appreciate it.
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Date: 3/26/2013 12:33:00 PM
This is fun and quirky, a great way to introduce yourself cant wait to read what else is goin on in ur mind! Welcome to poetry soup and thankyou for the nice comment on my poetry.
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Date: 3/26/2013 7:13:00 AM
Nice One :) Materialism Vs Non-material
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:46:00 AM
you have got a nice one there too, I am inspired by it. I feel important as a poet.
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