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Her beauty, her presence, leaves nothing to chance Unaware she steals eyes, at the very first glance takes air from the lungs, steals joy from the fun and brims with an essence that captures the sun A smile that's as natural as a day in the sun With hair slick and shining from an afternoon's fun Her skin pink and rosy Our eyes follow closely while legs long and slim, are like stems on the posies In her innocence taking it all for granted Not knowing that nature around her, enchanted This beautiful child, who never was told That she'll bloom like a flower that soon will unfold Into a beauty that remains yet untold ______________________________________________ 12/6/15 For Contest "Oil Paintings" sponsored by Eve Roper Image #2

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Date: 5/30/2016 9:22:00 PM
Damn! I almost forgot how well you write. Just dropped in for a while. Great.
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Date: 12/25/2015 9:52:00 PM
Carrie, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:40:00 PM
What a wonderful expression of the painting that you chose. Kudos to you Carrie, on a well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:10:00 PM
CARRIE :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:38:00 AM
Very nicely written, Carrie. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:52:00 PM
Carrie, I love this! It's an amazing write! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:51:00 PM
beautiful. SK
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