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The Room: Part One

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The Room: Part One

Quiet room, perhaps
The hammering of keyboards
Talking at the back

(By Peter Thomas and Dan Keir)

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  1. Date: 5/26/2015 4:49:00 PM
    Peter, awesome senryu

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Ah yes but peter... what colour are the desks? Do they remind you of any household everyday foodstuff? the great souper T. Hyam has written a poem on this that I belive is tangential in meaning to this poem. Read it. It reflects well, yes???? xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo x