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The River

the river beautiful deep green water.. summer fun beside the river a picnic... biting flies hungry
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/10/2015 11:06:00 PM
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Very nice write Sara :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/5/2015 8:14:00 PM
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A cute scene you painted for a river side picnic!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/5/2015 4:28:00 AM
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as you know I prefer traditional Haiku yet the beauty of your poem beguiles the senses Sara great pen 7
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 2:02:00 AM
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Sara, a joyful scene!!! weeee, next week we will be having a short picnic!!!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/4/2015 3:44:00 PM
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so well expressed, sara.. your river runs deep.. lovely!..huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2015 2:46:00 PM
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lovely imagery Sara - oh I can especially relate to the second one - if they don't bite me they land on my food lol:-) hugs jan xx7
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