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The Ride

"Come take a ride with me" That’s what he said The conservative side of me Almost jumped out and said; "huh uh, I don't do roller-coasters" but the look on his face prompted me to change my mind as if to say you don't know what you're missing, he has thrown down the gauntlet, and don't I love a challenge! I didn't need a second invitation as soon as I was strapped in, it started to move slowly, thinking to myself "I can handle this; it’s a piece of cake, not scary at all" What the hell? Who was I kidding? midway through the first lap, it started to bounce up and just as quickly it skid down again I grabbed the bars to stable myself in the seat leaving marks on my hands as I dug my fingernails deeper, into my own flesh. Glancing across I can see my fellow revelers’ mouths moving, but I can’t hear a word they're saying it looks like one of those silent movies all I can feel is my heart beating faster and with every movement praying for my safekeeping, at the same time cursing this guy next to me with a solemn promise that if I live to tell the tale, I will never allow myself to be talked into something this crazy again, even if the guy is as sexy as the one sitting next to me…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2012 10:53:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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Date: 5/2/2012 10:53:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:04:00 PM
Wilma, I like the take on your narrated poem.. I'm glad you obey your own limits.. and have standards.. congratulations with your featured poem of the week..... have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2012 3:03:00 PM
Great idea, Wilma, and very well put down. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/1/2012 6:22:00 AM
love your featured poem, Wilma, and love the ride also. harry
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Wilma. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:38:00 AM
I enjoyed this write, I can't help but feel that anxiety with you--but I would have to say though that I love roller coasters, heehee as i've read before, it actually calls for "sanctioned screaming"--gotta love that! thanks as well for all your comments in my writes :) all that mention of chocolate is making me crave for some chocolate cake too--have to head off for dinner though--:) enjoy your day!
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:52:00 AM
Been there...done that. (But with a girl next to me.) Great write about those butterflies that overcome you just as the bar comes down, and you're thinking - "What am I doin' here?" Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:48:00 AM
Well penned and nicely expressed thoughts
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