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The Red Sundress

THE RED SUNDRESS By Jack Horne She tried on her old red sundress and was young again. Her figure was slim, her hair was fair and men would buy her flowers. She danced to the looking glass. Her reflection was a real let down. She had wrinkles and dimples and rolls of lose flesh: a caricature of the curvaceous creature she had once been. The woman she had been, when the sundress was new, long gone: a stronger woman in her place. She smiled at the mirror, the inner woman smiling back. For Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Contest 'The Sundress'

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Date: 6/28/2011 9:26:00 AM
kind of late, but congratulations on your win for this fine and beautiful write. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home.
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Jack in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:36:00 PM
Awesome, Jack! Like I always believe, in the end truth stands out...her true, inner beauty remained. Congratulations on a deserving win in Constance's Contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:38:00 AM
I laughed again reading this for the second time, Jack. So happy to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:35:00 AM
Wonderful write here jack!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:34:00 PM
I'm glad she didnn't let that luter woman pull her down. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:26:00 PM
Really liked how you turned everything around in this empowering poem, Jack! What's within is definitely more important :) Congrats on your win with this :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, jack
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:55:00 PM
Way to go Jack .. congrats on your 6th place win in the sundress contest with this awesome piece my friend.. enjoy your top ten win with luv..
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:16:00 PM
Wonderful job Jack, congratulations on your sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:31:00 AM
A fabulous top-notch free verse, Jack. Sure to be on the winner's circle and thank you for your kind comments. Elaine
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Date: 3/23/2011 10:28:00 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments and concern Jack. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:52:00 AM
Great poem Jack! Every day i look into my bathroom's mirror, I detect more wrinkles, hahaha! But anyway I won't mind. No botox, no facelifts!!! Best of luck in Constance's contest!....:) Gert
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:10:00 PM
hmmm, that middle stanza depressing but at least you picked it up with a very uplifing ending! I think you did great with this entry.
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Date: 3/22/2011 7:29:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Jack, with this wonderful poem~~
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Date: 3/22/2011 4:15:00 PM
wrinkles dimples and rolls, this is why I am in no hurry to try on my sundress.... great entry best of luck in the contest
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Date: 3/22/2011 3:02:00 PM
At least she didn't feel sad looking into the mirror and seeing the wrinkles. Her "inner woman" was strong enough to accept age gracefully. Great entry for the contest, Jack. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful rendition Jack on the sundress in my fav color ..RED.. reminiscent thoughts of days gone by ... good luck in the contest.. and u will need to show Constance's name in full on the poem u enter per her instructions luv.. good luck...
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