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The razor

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The razor

     As you sit in front of the mirror with your razor
You start to pick out everything bad about yourself
You cry and cry because you like nothing about yourself
 You move your razor closer knowing what was going to happen next

  You start to pick out everything bad about yourself
No one cares, I'm worthless and useless: You think to yourself as you drive the razor into your skin
You move your  razor closer  knowing what was going to happen next
You feel a sense of relief, but then that relief slowly fades

    No one cares, i'm worthless and useless: You think to yourself as you drive the razor into your skin
You cry and cry because you like nothing about yourself
You feel a sense of relief, but then that relief slowly fades again
As you sit in front of the mirror with your razor

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  1. Date: 7/19/2013 5:49:00 AM
    Gives light to the saying "A few words that say alot" ... I like it :D

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:03:00 PM
    WOW...I LOVE IT...SKAT

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Respect for writing this piece. It is so easy to fall and drown, if your heart doesn't know how to swim and fly.