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The Raven Seccumbs

In an Arctic world So white, flies black The Ravens rule Is there a turning back For the Queen of darkness Against the white Naked and kneeling Has the dark turned to light For on a branch there perches Her Lieutenant so strong For in the distance The Murder Fly from A changing world Where the black is in demise When its princess Kneels down and cries The white has now melted The only black is night What turned this dark princess From her black to our white We will only know When her black stays away And the night is so natural But the light is our say http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-10.php

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Date: 3/9/2010 4:06:00 PM
Another amazing poem from your gifted pen James and always a treat to read ..happy there will be more coming to entertain us all..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:16:00 PM
Lovely poem,may all the light erase all darkness..through these fantasy wonderful poems,you are able to send a message James..you should write a book..I love this poem,again..Charma
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:01:00 PM
YOu are good at your fantasy, James. and thanks for your kind comment t me today. LUv ya, andrea ps. What is this I hear about your leaving Soup? CAn you tell me why??
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:33:00 PM
Sounds like folklore, I love the feel of this one James! Your poetry always is an anjoyable read. ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/7/2010 4:24:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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