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The Raven of Baptism River

Far as my eyes can see, 'till lake touches sky, Earth beats as one; Poplar, Jack Pine & Birch all Sing with the White Throated Sparrow, our Planet's Love songs. Sloping (5'canopy) an ancient Deer trail along the Baptism River (flowing into Lake Superior) I startle a Buck during his midday Nap. Soundlessly lifting up, He elegantly bounces away. From above, a dark object swoops in, Brother Raven is curious, (always a sentinel for Hawks And Bald Eagles). I stand motionless, willing my Neo-Cortex to flood my aura with peace; as I Extend my arm and gently imitate the Raven's Welcome call, a double-beat "Caw caw"...I am Here Raven, I am me". My heart quickens as He alights on my arm, talons gripping my Forearm gently, but firmly. Cocking my head, I look deeply into his obsidian eyes to his Soul...he imitates me, tilting his head in unison, letting my gaze enter. Images from high race Thru my mind...the rushing river...undulating Tree tops...in an instant, we have become Brothers of the wild, as I softly shake my arm To set him free. "I am me, Brother Raven, I am me" 05/30/15 © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/2/2016 9:56:00 AM
Amazing happening. Thank you for sharing...
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:58:00 AM
This is so very beautifully written! Truly loved it.
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:38:00 PM
I love how your spirituality is connected with your observation of nature...so beautiful... and Brother Raven... the names are so awesome. Your use of subtle personification really connects the reader, at least for me. There's a simplicity to it, that makes it so sweet. Awesome one! Always, Laura
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:53:00 AM
enjoyed your write, luv p.d.
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Date: 6/12/2015 2:39:00 PM
Very expressive work..I could just see the raven(crow) turning his head the way they do..I enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:27:00 PM
Wow Mr. Goff, this write is powerful ! Great write dear poet ! I have had a many encounters with nature as such, and never have put to words the incredible feel which you have delivered in this write sir ! Awesome....going to my favz ! Have a wonderful adventure my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:07:00 PM
This is extremely interesting,painted with vivid imagery,excellent write friend.........A.M.
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:18:00 PM
intimate connection with nature as seen from this incredible piece, jimbo... wonderful mirroring of the self with a symbolic bird.. wow!.. huggs
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Date: 5/31/2015 5:32:00 PM
James, your poem is outstanding and so visual, I could see it all happening, you did a fantastic job writing this this and thanks for visiting my poem, The Special Gift, yes fathers can be special too
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:35:00 AM
a blast to read you at last good fun walking the woods going back to my nap
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Date: 5/31/2015 12:02:00 AM
jimbo!... incredible work filled with sensitive imagery... a must-read nature-and-man piece; wow!.. huggs
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