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The Q-Universe: Loosing My Senses

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The letter "Q" happens to be the letter with the least number of words (based on existing dictionaries), for that reason, I decided to take a bunch of its words to compose a three part poetry series. This is the first part and I hope you do enjoy it.

I just found a new quarry; of my childish admiration, he should be wary having admirers have no quota so, I’m ready to line up even to the gutter. Starring embarrassingly, I have no qualms to his chocolate and well built arms. The Afro makes him quaint, his obvious protruding gluteus is about to make me faint. He responds with a look quite queerly that actually shows I’m doing things too early. How expensive is his emotion? Trust me, I can handle its quotation without a quiver, forever and ever. Oh boy! Right now, I don’t mind a quickie b’cos I’m gradually feeling silly just kiss me and I promise we’re quits and I’ll let it hang on my lips like sweets. I may be nurturing a wish quite quixotic but the feeling is unbelievably exotic.

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Date: 2/24/2015 10:11:00 PM
I read all the Q series, I know maybe not intended, but I smiled because I thought these poems also represented the character of "Q" if you know whom I mean!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/26/2015 7:40:00 AM
hahahaha... I know perfectly.... You've given me a great thought and have expanded my imaginations... I am sure a series of poems will follow in the coming days. Thanks a lot for your sweet and encouraging words
Date: 12/2/2014 5:25:00 AM
Well done Funom, Very clever working with Q. I shall read the rest of this series.
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:21:00 AM
Wooow Jerry T.... Thanks a lot for your warm visit

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