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The Pursuing Self - a Collab

Bestowed with life by One powerful Divine Gracious with His love scintillating shine I traverse roads: rose and weeded grounds Flaming with a soldier's will to expound From dawn begins my journey til sun sets So many roads bided, my ownself to sweat Courage bullets, I fire and fire Pursuing success my ringing desire Wait! hold on,don't go fast, echoes Rush runs may thud a sporadic tempo I have seen caterpillars dying as butterflies Buds bloom, spreading aroma, by-and-by The angelic aroma invites prosperity brush It's rouge shows maturation like royal flush Bravely. I go forth to reach every dream Conquering beyond foggy upstream If my own-self, a rebellion, resisting me Earthquake moan to call a break-free. Kaleidoscope faces became my preachers A halo or a tail experience: my teachers Tricky battalion of pressures stressing Yet, camouflage trials bomb to blessings Rewarding me with laughter and tears Adding tons of memories to my years Evolving beautiful to each season stir Wisdom and love, now, my own myrrh If I shall die this very day, I hope my legacy not a dismay... (C) Olive Eloisa and Malik Yaseen 9:38pm September 23, 2014

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Date: 4/2/2015 7:42:00 PM
PSS....... Here I am again, replying to your reply... hehheeh.. Yes I am bored... LINDA
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:34:00 AM
A great poem, an excellent collaborative.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2014 8:10:00 PM
Thanks much Maurice..:)
Date: 9/25/2014 12:55:00 AM
A finished and polished thing always looks better. Olive, you did it nicely and again proved that you are the One worth praises.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/25/2014 1:42:00 AM
hopefully, it will be my pleasure..
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 1:11:00 AM
aha... not much not much... :) we both did.. :) thanks much.. im looking forward to another write.. :D
Date: 9/24/2014 2:32:00 PM
I love this collaboration, Olive_eloi & Malik. Both your parts blend well together. Lovely ending, too. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 12:40:00 AM
thanks much Dearie PAul.. :D I have a fun writing with Malik.. :) Im caught by some of his poems.. the metaphors he used which i think i lack at times. :D
Date: 9/23/2014 8:27:00 PM
Olive, a wonderful collaboration. A world of each face.. Love how ya'll end the poem... Love Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 12:42:00 AM
thanks much Lollie Linda.. :D!!!! aha, i love it also that you come and drop me a comment!! hugs!!! call me olive oil its ok!!! :P (but keep in mind am more chubby than her) hahahha
Date: 9/23/2014 4:43:00 PM
really very beautifully drawn excellent piece
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 12:44:00 AM
thanks you liam .. :) God bless you always.. :)
Date: 9/23/2014 2:10:00 PM
This write to me is like a soldier's journey through the wars of hell, as he eventually looks back, worn and withdrawn, as the word peace allows him to reflect. A Soldier's Fortune is to survive. Fine poetry once again Olive & Malik, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 8:14:00 PM
mmmmn :) yhanks much Mr. James.. :D GBU

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