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He showed the ring, they were alone. He spoke these words, in a soft, sweet tone! "Darling, be my bride"! She let out, a romantic moan! She received, the Diamond stone! "Yes dear", she replied! 4/21/12 Contest: Tail Rhyme Time

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Date: 5/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Ralph. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2012 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win.....Sara
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Date: 5/15/2012 5:18:00 AM
a diamond of a rhyme, ralph.. congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:09:00 PM
well, I still think this is a darn good one. So cute! Congrats on the win, Ralph.
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:43:00 PM
Cubic Zerconium? lol..Well done Ralph and congrats. BG
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:21:00 PM
diamonds are a girl's best friend...congrats on your win Ralph..
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:21:00 PM
diamonds are a girl's best friend...congrats on your win Ralph..
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:53:00 PM
ohhhhh....so romantic !! Love it !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:54:00 AM
Very romantic!! Congrats Ralph on your win!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ralph!! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:32:00 AM
RALPH congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Ralph xx
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:42:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..The diamond sealed the sweet deal..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:42:00 PM
Ralph, a great entry.. You make it look soooo easy ;) all the best for the contest luv & hugs Wilma
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:59:00 AM
good luck with this Ralph, wonderful. harry
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:16:00 PM
oh, wow,this is one of the best ones I've seen. I love it, Ralph.
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Date: 4/21/2012 6:32:00 PM
Diamonds are the women`s best friend....Of cource she said YES!!! - lol..... - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/21/2012 5:42:00 PM
A lovely write for the contest, Ralph. Good luck!
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Date: 4/21/2012 5:32:00 PM
Great poem for the contest. makes me think back forty years.
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