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The Promise, a Vow Broken

The Promise, A Vow Broken Let me take you to the edge of heaven a week we have the lucky number seven Each day shall pass love wrapped time every moment, every minute so sublime Nights will see our lusts celebrated only for you was I gifted and created That gift is only the purest of Love beautiful as a snow white turtle dove Before each dawn ends every lovefest we shall forever forget all the rest Each memory will be eternally given in sexual madness we both be driven Madness others only beg to ever get soaked in love we shall never regret This is my romantic promise to you we together, so deeply locked as two! R.J. Lindley jan, 09, 1975 note: A poem , a vow I made so long ago. Only broken by the hate birthed from her drug addiction a year later. Even then I carried the torch for a few more years but finally saw that my life must be lived. I then , only then broke that youthful vow.. Sometimes life just suxs and then we must go on...

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Date: 9/23/2014 3:49:00 PM
True love, and especially loyalty are not as common as they once were. I've been there, and when a vow has to be broken, something has to have given for it to be. Fine piece Robert, James :)
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:09:00 AM
Yes, real love is true and loyal. Sympathy for your problems. daver
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Date: 9/22/2014 7:51:00 PM
Hey Robert what a lovely poem, your life was certainly turned upside down but now you have such a wonderful life with Riza by your side and I am so happy for you, give her my love and take care the two of you...........Vera...............
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/22/2014 10:08:00 PM
Yes, you are right I finally got my bliss, my wife and our son. All those trials and tribulations were possibly the fire that had to bake the pottery .. I being me brought so much of it upon myself. A stubborn mule for sure was I.. Riza and Justin shout hi to you guys and Riza says you have me pegged dead to right my friend.. lol
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/22/2014 7:53:00 PM
By the way Robert if these events didn't happen in your life what would you write about, but then knowing you, you could write about anything..........Vera.......
Date: 9/22/2014 3:19:00 PM
compelling write well done, robert.. huggs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/22/2014 10:04:00 PM
Thanks much my friend....

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