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The Presence

I am at my very beginning old shelter, Yet I feel very lonely, Is it something which missed my heart? Churn'd my smooth heart. I am like a cassowary bird Chunk'd from flying. I lay down on my cot with closed eyes, Yet a pair of twinkling eyes never leave me, Is it something which missed my heart? Oh I yearn for you. A home to my heart is far away As if vanished in the deep blue sea. I tried to sit and write, Yet a speed calligraphic hand crossed my mind, Is it something which missed my heart? I knew my future lays await. Someone who is waiting for my homecoming Whose in his heart is my home.

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Richard Palmer

Date: 8/17/2012 6:28:00 AM

nice write Watisungla,love the concept

Watisungla Ao
Date: 8/17/2012 6:32:00 AM

Hi Richard thnx 4 ur lovely comments :)

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 8/16/2012 8:33:00 AM

Quite a lovely one born of a lonely heart for homecoming. It's with deep reflective insight. I love it.

Watisungla Ao
Date: 8/17/2012 6:35:00 AM

Fisayo thnk u so much 4 ur lovely comments :)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/14/2012 12:21:00 PM

Lovely expressions shows you have great potentials. With best wishes..Ravindra

Watisungla Ao
Date: 8/15/2012 9:51:00 AM

Ravindraji thnx 4 ur comments..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2012 11:10:00 AM

You made a : L.. O .. N.. G.. very good poem, like it - well written from the top to bottom! - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)Welcome to visit mine poems. :)

Watisungla Ao
Date: 8/12/2012 11:18:00 AM

Thnx Anne Lise :) wel jus checkin ur lovely poems :)

Willie Wright

Date: 8/12/2012 9:52:00 AM

Wonderfully vivid.

Watisungla Ao
Date: 8/12/2012 11:02:00 AM

Thnx :)