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The Power of Tongue

The world paid attention to this muscle inside my skull. It became famous, it became controversial. It says something outrageous, something unskeptical. It speaks for what is right, It speaks what's on our mind. Sometimes it's like a piece of cotton candy,melts inside my mouth. So sweet , so delicious,it tickles my throat through my heart. Sometimes it becomes a sharp blade, Slashing my flesh 'til I break down and die. This little muscle seem so strong, It can break the hardest steel, It can create a ball of fire. It can move someone on top, It can sweep someone in dust. This one can overruled you, Has the power to control all of you. It can separate people in different place. It puts division, a boundaries for race. It separates people according to its language. It dictates freedom, it declares war. It give some a reputation, It delivers someone to mortification. This little muscle inside your head, It must be handled without ego. 'Cos we don't know where it can lead you. ** 6th place Winner in PD's Contest: Any poem # 20**

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Date: 9/24/2014 2:32:00 PM
Very intricate, deep powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita
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Date: 6/17/2014 5:43:00 PM
'the limits of my language means the limits of my world' Wittgenstein
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:14:00 PM
AiyaH. I hereby felicitate (congratulate) you on your win! Good job and superb poem!! Best wishes, -- ivo
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Date: 4/22/2014 11:57:00 AM
Powerful tongue! Such a useful and satisfying weapon, but there are many times when it has to be controlled. Better one word less than be sorry afterwards. // congrats on fine win:) // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 12:06:00 PM
Exactly! ..better be no words than be sorry afterwards... :) ThaNk you for commenting on my poem, PAuL!!! ^_^ Congratulations,too!! :O)
Date: 4/22/2014 5:24:00 AM
Well said ,,, truly it has the real power,,,macho,,,Wonderful write n a great win,, congrats Aiyah!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 12:30:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, it's always a pleasure fro me to see your comment... Thank you so much!!! ..and Congratulations, too!! ^_^
Date: 4/22/2014 1:58:00 AM
Brilliant write and congrats on the win, Aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Ram!! :O)
Date: 4/21/2014 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on the win Torres :D
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much , Mr. Smith!! :O)
Date: 4/21/2014 9:56:00 PM
HI AIYAH Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 2:56:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you so much lady for always giving my poem a chance to be part of your winning lists... The feeling is still the same.. I'm still thrilled and excited to see the contest winner page.. lol.. THank you so much sweetie ,PD!!! :O))
Date: 4/13/2014 12:20:00 AM
Yes, the tongue does design. You covered a lot of territory in this fine write. Good philosophy. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 2:58:00 PM
Hey JAB.. thank you so much dear... this is so overwhelming!!! :O))
Date: 4/6/2014 7:33:00 AM
- Wise words and thoughts from a beautiful young lady - watch out for sharp tongues - well done my dear friend. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:11:00 PM
Hi Anne... Thanks for this wonderful message my friend.. :O))
Date: 4/5/2014 2:02:00 AM
Daring philosophical poetry, I love it. A muscle that can make or break boundries. A weapon that can beso heavy or light. Xool message. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:08:00 PM
Hey J.A.B.. it's nice to see your kind words in my poem,..ThaNks@ LoT!! :O))
Date: 4/5/2014 1:05:00 AM
Maddening truths here. Truths that will hurt the weak & deliriously blind. Fantastic.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:06:00 PM
Hey! Hey!! Hey!!! ...it's you again my dearest ,DRake!! it's my pleasure to have your comment on my poem... and you said it well dear...!!! :"O))
Date: 4/5/2014 1:00:00 AM
spell it "tongue" my friend. Wow, you have created a very nice poem on the power of the spoken word. giving it a physical attribute, that little muscle inside the head, was a genius way to approach the topic. and I like how you added in that it separates people by race as well. Great thoughts.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:05:00 PM
Hi Andie... I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem.. You are so kind my friend..Thank you so much!! :'O))
Date: 4/5/2014 12:22:00 AM
It can lead you into trouble, and get you out of it too. Very nice poem, good job.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:02:00 PM
thank you so much, Jim!! :"O))
Date: 4/4/2014 5:44:00 PM
Yes the tongue...It can be so loving but also so destructive..Beautiful write my dear...Hugs Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
Hey Smith,,, Thank you for this very kind feed back!! :"OO))
Date: 4/4/2014 5:35:00 PM
soup mail....PD
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Date: 4/4/2014 5:34:00 PM
A friend, powerful meaning... Enjoyed the poem.... xox...Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/8/2014 9:51:00 AM
thank you, PD! .:O)) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.!!! I just replied now 'cos I had a flu this past 3 days/.. ^_^
Date: 4/4/2014 4:02:00 PM
The Bible said "life and death is in the power of the tongue", Aiyah! (Proverbs 18:21). Yes, we have to be careful :) A very good write. I love it!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/4/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thank you ,Toguyen ...!! thanks for sharing me this thoughts... :')) Happy weekend~~ ^__^

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