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The Power and Beauty of Breathing

Beauty is life Everything in life must be worthwhile We can’t only feel but see A manifestation of virtues. Power is yet one But those who wields it must conform Death is the antonym of life However, also beautiful as you rest in peace. Never in death that power as it doesn’t move Breathing makes us inspire others to love It requires to be a devote Indeed, beauty and power should stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/22/2012 2:57:00 AM
Dalila, wow.. life* bares it all ... beauty is a power,, that can't be controlled... I'm actually out raged with all the beauty we have now a days... excellent poem..pd
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Date: 7/20/2012 9:57:00 PM
Powerful verse Dalila, gives me hope to be on the right track as I go through life.
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Date: 7/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
hi dalila, been a while...the strength of this work lies in the depth of your words so enlightening.." death is the antonym of life" says it all... soulful read on a rainy day!..:) huggs!
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