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The Pool

for i was by the pool for i was the only fool you asked me if i wanted to be healed i gave you an excuse ,because that was how i feel nobody ever talked to me let alone help, you see for i did not even know your name or hear of the miracles you proclaim all you said was pick up your mat the look in your eyes was that is i felt myself being healed from head to toe excited i heard you say one more thing go and sin no more

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Date: 3/6/2014 9:32:00 PM
An interesting write that can be interpreted more than one way.
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 3/6/2014 10:25:00 PM
thanks robert

Book: Shattered Sighs