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the point

I can't tell the point
where I stop and you begin
the two intertwine

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  1. Date: 5/27/2015 10:22:00 PM
    Haven't seen you post in forever

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:46:00 PM
    good one..pd

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 10:25:00 AM
    well done...TAH

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 6:33:00 PM
    very creative write , J.B.

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Very nice..I think it might qualify as a senryu...BG