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The Poetic Struggle

Looking around Now I know Why the views Don't Comment so They didn't get it Now I see It was only Clear to me I must write better, To describe These burning thoughts I have inside And refuse To take heart lack of comments For My Art

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/2/2014 5:29:00 PM
Hey, Jerry... I like this. I love your style. It seems that everything I read is humorous or at least a little tongue in cheek.
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Date: 7/30/2014 9:05:00 PM
I must say, I like the suggestions below, because after being here for such a long time, I'm constantly amazed by the wonderful poems that often do not get comments. The like button would be such a great idea! You are a gifted poet....one of so many that should be read and appreciated! Ps.......I'm so honored to be among the winners in your recent contest, and can't thank you enough !! Thank you Jerry....I'm so grateful for the nod !! :)
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Date: 7/28/2014 3:24:00 PM
if you see space for improvement,improve Jerry,this site has some great writers,read,be entertained,but at the same time learn, perfect your skills,nice write bro
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:38:00 AM
Casarah has a very good suggestion. A like button sounds good, but, no dislike button. It is hard to comment on every poem, Jerry, but I will comment on this one. Liked.... Robert.
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:33:00 PM
Wasn't going to comment on how bad this was but......no just kidding...lol.....I agree that many don't comment but just cherish the ones that do....cheers
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/28/2014 6:16:00 AM
That was a good one, got me laughing first thing this morning. I have to agree with you, but I do appreciate knowing, that there is someone behind the view
Date: 7/27/2014 4:49:00 PM
I like your thoughts and your art, it is dissappointing those that view without comments, there should be a like button, so if someone is shy they can still like your work!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/28/2014 6:19:00 AM
You have a good point, I wish we could add images also, I like to illustrate my stories. Thank Casarah for you comment
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 5:34:00 PM
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