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The Poetess

There lives with-in, a grande dame fair, goddess of many talents rare. Yet, humble in her own shy way, she weaves her words without delay, beyond compare. You might just think she lives to write, that poetry consumes her sight. I see a soul that lives to love . . . to share below and rise above, in divine light. A beauty only few can see is gifted in her poetry. As dawn reveals through clouded sky the glory of its golden eye, in majesty. A tapestry in varied hues . . . a rainbow painted over blues. Her lovely words continue on. They’ll live long after she is gone, to greet her muse. This poem is in The Florette form created by Jan Turner Note: ‘Since the Sumerian poet Enheduanna carved her odes to the goddess Inanna in cuneiform tablets more than 4,500 years ago, civilizations have expressed their most beautiful, tragic, triumphant, and perceptive thoughts through poetry.’

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Date: 8/4/2013 5:06:00 PM
The golden thread of life's tapestry does connect all of us Connie. I like to think when Einstein spoke of the string theory, that on the sub atomic level connects all things, he was speaking of life's golden thread science and God get closser togeather all the time.Enjoyed your work. Be happy; your friend Michael.
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Date: 12/24/2012 8:35:00 PM
Connie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:24:00 PM
Wow, a very interesting form I never heard of. It's very light and makes a beautiful swinging rhythm. Sounds right away very neat and classic. Another masterpiece from our Connie. Than you for the note. Love, Hanitra
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Date: 6/15/2012 11:51:00 AM
This poem is a nice portrayal, with warm-like images.& the rhyme goes along great .this poetess must really be something! ~always&forever Lynette
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:01:00 PM
aha, and I see THIS unique poem won a contest. Was it the woman's contest also? WAY to GO, Connie. Be sure to let Jan know!
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:00:00 PM
connie, thanks for your wonderful comment on my womankind poem. I'm so happy you like it. Do you remember it from long ago? Maybe I never showed it to you before? I'm playing catchup here at Soup but I think your trochee is the one poem I have not seen and am saving those for when I judge. I hope I like it!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/9/2012 11:33:00 AM
Connie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Tell us of Women" contest Connie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Connie
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Date: 5/2/2012 10:49:00 PM
This is such a wonderful tribute to the poetess, dear Connie ^_^! I think I can think of so many who can fit this description. I really like how you used Jan's form here-- I have yet to try this form but you made it look easy to do-- thanks as well for adding the note below-- something new learned for me today! And sweet Andrea told us in her blog that it's your birthday!! Happy happy birthday to you, dear Connie ^_^! Sending you the warmest hugs and love and wishing you all the best! :D
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:48:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to our amazing and talented friend, Jan. Hey, connie, I recently told my friend Jack Horne about Jan's forms over at Shadowpoetry. He checked her out and used her wrapped refrain and trijan refrain, and ALSO he did MY two forms . Go see them sometime!!!
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:00:00 PM
poems on cuneiform? it's my first time hearing it.
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:52:00 PM
This is good written Connie, a beauty to read. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/1/2012 6:37:00 AM
Connie, I like this very much, I did think it was about you though, you are certainly gifted, if for a contest good luck..David
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:16:00 PM
About me, my goodness No David. It is about all the lady poets here combined whose attributes I speak of. Ladies like Andrea, Nikko, Debbie, Elizabeth, Carrie, Carolyn. . .and the list goes on and on. Thank you for your kind words David and I have entered it in a recent contest about women. Mahalo
Date: 5/1/2012 5:20:00 AM
hey there, been a while...a beautiful collage of how the heart wants to express itself through the written word... enjoyed the rich content and word behavior, connie, along with mythical allusions... winning huggs!
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