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The Poet and His Mistress -A Collaboration With the Romantic Liam Mc Daid

The Poet And His Mistress ~A Collaboration With The Romantic Poet ~Liam Mc Daid Her lustrous skin captures his vision He gently carves his desire on her The foreplay of word begins As she divulges the door to heaven Bewitched by the color of her moonlight, he bathes within the salt of her valley The mystery behind his curtain of words Is unlocked by his divine mistress His heart races when she silently meets the poet of her sensual dreams As he traces her beauty with his fingertips Ice melts on her crimson lips And the foreplay of word begins Thank you Liam for sharing The canvas with me

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2016 1:16:00 PM

An excellent collaboration teeming with suggestive phrases and the pleasure of anticipation. I'm still musing about which part you wrote, Red:) hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2016 8:46:00 AM

You and Liam have created magic!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2016 1:26:00 PM

Red Fiery, you are amazing when writing with others. I love the line, "Ice melts on her crimson lips" MMM juicy imagery. A perfect 7 for a collaboration. Love LINDA

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/14/2016 9:52:00 AM

Wow... This evokes deeply sensual memories for me of my travel around the world to meet and marry my wife. She the only mistress I'll ever need. Much to my poetic muse's great ire. Adding this jewel to my fav list, you guys created a superb poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2016 12:38:00 PM

- Really beautiful and romantic from you both Red & Liam - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/13/2016 11:46:00 AM

Really love how this all came together red truly your pen is golden thank you kindly for joining ink wishing you a blessing of a day must say how you put it together excellent

Red Fiery
Date: 5/13/2016 11:59:00 AM

Thank you for sharing the canvas with me :)