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The Poet and His Mistress

Her lustrous skin captures his vision He gently carves his desire on her The foreplays of word begins As she divulges the door to heaven Bewitched by the color of her moonlight, he bathes within the salt of her valley The mystery behind his curtain of words Is unlocked by his divine mistress His heart races when she silently meets the poet of her sensual dreams As he traces her beauty with his fingertips Ice melts on her crimson lips And the foreplays of word begins Thank you red for sharing pens A Collaboration With Red Fiery and Liam Mc Daid| Year

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Lemonia Sims

Date: 5/24/2016 2:49:00 PM

very moving

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/16/2016 1:59:00 PM

Liam, A great co-write here by you and Red Fiery!! With just the right hint of being racy, but for sure passionate and sensual. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:23:00 AM

thank you Gary for such a lovely comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2016 1:31:00 PM

- Lovely and romantic, poems from you Liam & Red - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:24:00 AM

You are a sweetheart my dear:)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/16/2016 11:00:00 AM

A fabulous and passionate collaboration. I love the line "The mystery behind his curtain of words Is unlocked by his divine mistress"

Red Fiery
Date: 5/17/2016 2:24:00 AM

Thank you Tim for such a lovely comment...:)

Red Fiery

Date: 5/16/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Liam for mixing ink with me... This came up so beautifully... Cheers~red

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/16/2016 8:24:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Red Fiery.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/16/2016 7:23:00 AM

Hot! hot! the foreplays of words begin...what a steamy collaboration :)