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The Planting

The Planting Seeds of sorrow lay scattered along our path so oft intertwined with Nature's wrath Yet till the fields of dreams we simply must for soon, so very soon we turn to dust Green is the color of majestic newborn fields as man enjoys rich fruits of earth's harvested yields The sweat and pain given is the simple cost thus we survive so ALL humanity is not lost Life requires our own ground be rightly prepared ignorance is a calamity so many are ensnared We eat the dust long before we bake the bread we seek ease oft greater sorrows we get instead We plant our own seeds to dream, to reap anew yet we all pay, life is not free, tis so very true! Robert Lindley, 10-01- 2014 note: Inspired by this morn's reading of Debbie Guzzi's super fine poem , a great sonnet -- The Sowing I give thanks for this inspiration and the joy in reading both her sonnets this great morn. Certainly brought me out of a slump and crazy haze these last few days.. Amazing how sometimes another poet can blow one away and change another's entire attitude.

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Date: 10/5/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Arthur. Wish I could, wish I had the time too. Recent tragic events in my life force me to write, read and post less .. Has put me in a depressing haze, fog if you will. I now fight it to return to being me. The whole me before this recent death.
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Date: 10/4/2014 11:50:00 PM
Very very beautiful!!!! Now plant some goodwill and answer us all!!!!!!! ( kidding ) loved this one!!!
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Date: 10/5/2014 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Arthur. Wish I could, wish I had the time too. Recent tragic events in my life force me to write, read and post less .. Has put me in a depressing haze, fog if you will. I now fight it to return to being me. The whole me before this recent death.
Date: 10/4/2014 7:45:00 PM
Thanks to all that have commented.
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:19:00 AM
Debbie may have inspired you, but you too have a fantastic piece. How you sow nature along with human lives, as intertwined as our very existence.
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Date: 10/3/2014 4:37:00 AM
From a tree a seed fell onto the ground and took roots thus it grew to a magnificent tree itself and reached the height of the mother tree! Incomparably beautiful with deep meanings , dear Robert!
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Date: 10/2/2014 1:46:00 PM
a singing inside beautiful picture robert excellent pen
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Date: 10/2/2014 12:16:00 AM
Thanks to all that have commented on this write. When such inspiration comes its like a great Christmas present been given. I hope the readers have visited Debbie's poem that inspired it and commented there. A truly fantastic write. Titled --The Sowing..
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Date: 10/1/2014 11:39:00 AM
True last lines Robert! What a great work my friend! Hv now to go to read ur inspiration on Debbie's.
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Date: 10/1/2014 10:35:00 AM
Yes you did this very well Robert and thanks so much for the compliment! Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2014 9:27:00 AM
"ignorance is the calamity so many are ensnared" what challenging line RObert.. :) awesome write here.. :) indeed, its nice that a poet can inspire some poets too.. :D hope you are doing ok.. :)
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Date: 10/1/2014 9:10:00 AM
Very absorbing indeed...I have read your notes and background of your write. It's so inspiring..I loved it. Thanks Robert.
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