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The Perfect Postcard

The hoar frost coated the trees Creating a picturesque scene A wonderful winter land dream Everything coated in white An unbelievable sight An enchanted winter delight A picture perfect postcard.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 2:16:00 PM

I just love it when I find one of yours I have not viewed yet! This is really nice to describe a beautiful winter postcard, Phyllis. LEt me check my soupmail to see what you had to tell me.

Brian Strand

Date: 3/23/2010 4:34:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian

Mitch White

Date: 3/22/2010 7:14:00 AM

Nice picture you have painted here Smiles

Date: 3/20/2010 8:30:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words in this one. Fitting title. Keep up the good writing. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/19/2010 8:43:00 AM

your rhyming is so much better. i can tell that your learning from me. lol john

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/10/2010 6:36:00 AM

Great imagery in this verse. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Chicken Blogs”. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2010 4:57:00 AM

Beautiful Phyllis, I would rather see it on a postcard. We had more then enough this year. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 3/9/2010 11:27:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Phyllis.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2010 7:57:00 PM

Sounds lovely Phyllis.. beautiful words of description.. thankxxx for sharing and for your special comments on my blog once again.. appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2010 1:44:00 PM

Great write that seems like enchantment..Life is not exactly like that is it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2010 1:22:00 PM

I wish you could mail one to me.....it sounds lovely!! ~ Love, Carrie

T.L. Drover

Date: 3/9/2010 1:14:00 PM

Nice imagery. I have seen many a beautiful morning just as you described it!