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The Perfect Mom

She was there for me when I took my first breath. It was she that offered comfort as I lay my head on her chest. It was her hand that reached for mine whenever I would stumble. And it was her soft voice I heard when the storm outside would rumble. It was her eyes that filled with tears when I made my very first A. And it was her ear that would listen when I had a bad day. It was her lips that smiled at me filled with such pride. When I brought into this world her very first grandchild. It was her arms that held me when I laid my husband to rest. And it was her words of encouragement that kept me from falling off the edge. It was her mind that taught me how to be strong. And it was her heart that taught me to admit when I was wrong. It was her life that I prayed for night after night. And it was my selfishness that constantly pushed her to fight. It was her face that told me she had finally found peace. And that her time here was over as I was overcome with grief. It was my cries that could be heard for many miles I know. And it was my tears that stained the satin roses lying beneath her name in stone. It is my heart that feels her everywhere I go. And it is her spirit that will keep me safe until God calls me home. She was there for me when I took my very first breath. And I was there for her when she took her very last. She is in Heaven now waiting with wide open arms. Because that is what she is she's The Perfect Mom.

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Date: 9/22/2009 1:52:00 PM
Wow! There were some awesome writers for this contest! This one got my eyes to well up a bit thinking about my mom and how that experience will feel like when it happens to me. Definitely a deserved win!
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Date: 9/21/2009 2:49:00 PM
Excellent poem Kristina, congratulations on winning Constance's contest, well desereved>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:38:00 AM
Dearest Kristina, This poem reached right into my soul and touched it. Congratulations on your very well deserved win. Much Love, Lainie The tears are still flowing.
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Date: 9/20/2009 1:46:00 PM
What a loving tribute...such a beautiful winning poem! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/20/2009 1:35:00 PM
Kristina, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/20/2009 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Kristina. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2009 4:44:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2009 4:40:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to a perfect mom, she seem to be just that, from all that you said in your poem. Welcome to soup, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/13/2009 8:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem Kristina, what a wnderful piece to read. A warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 9/13/2009 8:23:00 AM
this is a very creative poem, what a wonderful tribute to a perfect mom... all good moms deserve this. please keep writing, you are great! welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/13/2009 4:58:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Kristina. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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