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The Perfect Day

Mist rises from the valley floor Sunshine peeks over the mountain top silhouetting the Coopers Hawk soaring in the southern breeze I sit in my old oak rocking chair drinking my dark black coffee taking it all in. Mornings don't get any finer I am one one with nature. The smell of flapjacks fill the air Then out walks you my heart skips a beat as you smile brighter than the clear blue stream blending in beautifully with the azure sky your caramelized eyes glisten each time you glance my way I can't help but smile for this is the perfect day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2015 9:53:00 PM
Enjoyed very much. I felt myself there in that moment.
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Date: 7/18/2015 6:18:00 PM
This is a great write and makes me wish I had a cabin somewhere I could retreat to...complete with an oak rocker, haha. Thanks for the mental vacation, Tim!
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Date: 7/18/2015 12:20:00 PM
Great poem, sweet to the heart, keep it up,
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Date: 7/2/2015 9:16:00 PM
a perfect day captured beautifully *luv p.d.
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:54:00 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
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Date: 7/1/2015 8:39:00 PM
Wonderful write hugs Eve
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Date: 7/1/2015 11:05:00 AM
Your words are descriptive and float their message onto the page with a loving heart and a splash of color that captures the reader's imagination and attention. Emile. #7
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Date: 7/1/2015 8:35:00 AM
written from an inspired pen, tim... a delightful POTD read!..huggs
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Date: 7/1/2015 2:54:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Tim with this enchanting poem! 7
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Date: 6/30/2015 11:00:00 PM
Ahhh, to start out the day feeling blessed and happy, it just gets better and better like your poem! Congrats, Tim!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/30/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you everyone for all the fabulous comments and congratulations. I am truly honored.....Tim
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:48:00 PM
Congrats. on your poem of the day,really deserves it...One of my most favourite of yours Tim.
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:08:00 PM
Being one with nature sure helps to enjoy a perfect day. Congrats Tom on POTD. // paul
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Date: 6/30/2015 5:37:00 PM
What a well written awesome poem and I love the part about the black coffee!
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Date: 6/30/2015 5:09:00 PM
A great and wonderful poem. Excellent......7!.........A.M.
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Tim, another beautiful poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/30/2015 1:53:00 PM
congratulations Tim on your Poem of the Day accomplishment, well done.
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Date: 6/30/2015 1:14:00 PM
:) Perfect days are sweet indeed. Congrats on POTD, Tim.
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Date: 6/30/2015 1:12:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS TIM SMITH...
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:37:00 AM
Tim, congratulations on having this beautiful poem selected as Poem of the Day
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:20:00 AM
Lovely words TIM. BIG CONGRATULATIONS! ~Olive Eloisa =)
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:42:00 AM
You nailed it bro. A perfect poem for a perfect day. In Africa it is more perfect with a keg of Tombo and a box of Utaba.
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:02:00 AM
Getting a POTD makes your day better than perfect. Congratulations, Tim!
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:31:00 AM
Tim, A perfect poem indeed for a perfect day!! Congratulations on POTD!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 6/29/2015 10:46:00 PM
It is indeed a perfect poem on a perfect day!! I swear I saw a hawk or an eagle or something today here in kentucky. Then saw another and they flew up in a tree!!
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