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The Patient In Room 407

She was just an old lady- Brave and sweet and sad, She was smart and she was quick With eyes that didn't miss a lick. She was my patient and my elder, And she knew that this was it-- The end of a life well lived- Six children raised and loved and fit. Twelve grandchildren by her bedside With tears of love and sorrow, "If only we could borrow A little more time" they cried. She touched the hands that were extended, Looked with pride and breathed a sigh, "I'll always be near you because I love you" She smiled and then she died. The end of a life well lived Six children raised and loved and fit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/21/2010 9:41:00 PM
Very moving, peaceful, and well written. David
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:52:00 PM
Dear Patricia, Beautiful and heartwrenching with a valuable lesson to be learned. Wonderful wrinting! lainie
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:10:00 PM
Nice tribute to someone who touched your life. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Patricia on this very touching poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 11/17/2008 6:25:00 AM
A lovely poem, and a wonderful tribute. Nicely done, and well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie
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