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The Passing Narcissist

I saw him, taller than corn, a high-collared shirt, and wristy Rolex smile; beguile: the club, deep-dark low, and drawing in the rich and not so and then moving from the brewing bar, the jar of late custom, floated to a sofa, sitting and announced, ”here’s the ladies, come to dance,” and lacquered whores, employed with fizzy drinks, circled him like robbers, buy a horse; And he was hand-made, every detail Sachs, Dior, light and shade; what silver spade had so fashioned, I do not know, such a loathsome song of self-love, and glow? and later when he left, a monarch rising from his borrowed throne, I thought perhaps he wasn’t bad, or wasn’t good, nothing you could finger same, and say Oh yes, it’s plain! and he smiled a smile of self- love, not hope, passing me as I drank; and when he’d gone, I fancied I’d seen the Devil; or the Devil’s name, holidaying fresh from hell; and quickly I looked the room; for candle, book and bell; wondering now if I’d drawn in, his hellish earthly spell.

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Date: 2/19/2015 2:39:00 AM
You, sir, are a very capable poet! You are endowed with excellent powers of observation. A good poem! Expressing an opinion not just of a despisable person but of the world at large: A world that is all sound-bite and image - and no substance!! :) john. P.s A "Seven"!!
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:40:00 PM
very awesome and cool write. love the rythem you use very unique.
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 2/18/2015 11:03:00 PM
Thanks Nathan...peace and love...Peter
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Nathan D.
Date: 2/18/2015 10:41:00 PM
yes natural is was meant. your poetry flows very naturally. easy on the eyes/ears

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