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poem syllable counter 10 syllables per line

140 syllables  14 lines  112 words

Italian Sonnet rhyme scheme

abba  abba  cde  cde

 

My neighborhood park was across the street Sometimes supine, in a patch of clover Look to the sky watch jets fly over Close my eyes and be in the pilot's seat Going somewhere to an island retreat Maybe have wealth, be the island's owner Have a big car with a private chauffeur Buy all the cake and ice cream I could eat Just lay in the clover and wish sometimes Pretend I was a famous movie star Hang out with "The Duke" or The Lone Ranger I would wear his mask for a cool disguise Mom would call and I'd come back from afar My neighborhood park, there was no danger Feb 15- 2016 An original poem by Daniel Turner

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Date: 2/18/2016 12:21:00 PM
Full of colour and a pleasure to read - thanks
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, Declan for taking the time to read and comment. Love your name! American or Irish? Peace:)
Date: 2/15/2016 11:24:00 PM
Nicely done Daniel :) - cheers
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sarah. I'm still trying to figure out the different kinds of sonnets. Your kind words are very encouraging. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. This is a new style for me. Peace young lady:)

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