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The Pain I Now Burden You With

Ache Let it sink —deep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/20/2016 10:34:00 PM
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Sharp and to the point ... you caught me off guard with so few words used ... and yet said what you needed to say to get the emotions across. PS. It's not often you find a poem where the title is actually longer than the content!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/21/2016 12:51:00 AM
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Without it, I suppose it could several directions..thanks for stoppin by this one. <3~Laura
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 1/2/2012 10:53:00 PM
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Dear Laura, Wow, Powerful statement I like this alot You are Truely a Laureat POET It's getting Late and I'm going to bed but I have Tomorrow Off See YOU then LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR POETIC Admirer...Harry
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Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 11/7/2011 3:26:00 PM
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Ouch!:)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/11/2011 9:16:00 PM
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Jeez! So powerful :-)
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Honestly J.T.
Date: 7/25/2011 10:22:00 PM
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i enjoyed this write.
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Kyle Carlson
Date: 7/25/2011 1:07:00 AM
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So powerful with so little words - Kyle
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