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The Orbit

The orbit. You drew a circle, the cute geometry, around you , an orbit permitted /forbidden for a foregone specificity. Made it large enough that you weren’t out of it, pulled or not, by the old gravity that seizes the ever raw soul . You went about fooling with the geodesies of here and its forms of acceptance in another there , encountering nothing that you would ever make a compact with. A random peaceableness perhaps on a loose day just before it breaks into a spell of footloose this and that , heart punching buttons calling moral police to march into a mere mail box and you in the witness box inside the circle you drew a square peg in a round orbit. By S.Jagathsimhan Nair For SKAT A's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 2:39:00 AM
such a wise, deep melody that makes me ponder... sweet congrats, jag.. come on over!.. huggs
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:43:00 PM
Awesome pen Nair ! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:59:00 PM
JAG. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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