The One

I wish I was the one The one that make your heart beat faster The one that makes you smile, for no reason The one that completes you I wish I was that one The one that will always keep you from falling The one that keeps your hope alive I wish I was the girl you see in your dreams, the one you gave your heart to I wish I was the one I would give you my forever if only I was that one

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 11/15/2016 4:22:00 PM

This is incredibly touching and capturing by the feelings and the depth and the way you put it together is completely beautiful and mesmerizing , I give you 7 for this one , hugs / / :)

Sonya Stewart
Date: 11/15/2016 4:28:00 PM

thanks

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/15/2016 4:05:00 PM

You are the one, Sonya:) Love the heartfelt poem!

Sonya Stewart
Date: 11/15/2016 4:08:00 PM

thanks Daniel