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The Old Wood

He said cover me with poems when I'm in the old wood paint your eyes of sapphire and run free you should. I am the small dreams in your memory the waterfall in your tears the beat in your heart the life of your art. He said I am the papercut that bleeds a quick pain I am the door not shut I am a lingering sugar cane. I am the ash of beauty the reality of nothing the instruments in sing the streep of a sting. Yes, cover him with poems when he's in the old wood paint his eyes of sapphire and run free he should.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/24/2011 10:46:00 AM
well written
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Erin. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:00:00 AM
Erin, haunting and moving. I can't help but feel influence from Robert Frost.
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Erin Nash
Date: 11/10/2011 6:25:00 AM
thank you, I love the fact that poetry is subjective
Date: 11/4/2011 3:32:00 AM
Well written enjoyable read.
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Erin Nash
Date: 11/10/2011 6:27:00 AM
thank you anthony..its my favourite poem that i've written

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