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The Old Rocking Chair

There’s another child on the way I’ll still be here As I was for generations Year after year after year I’ve seen a revolution and a Civil war Brother against brother and cities burned Memories of Cassie and me on the front porch Waiting for her soldier who never returned Each generation had its’ own story From heartbreak and tears to romance and love I was sitting there through it all Warm sunny days and nights with the stars up above I was handed down as the torch was passed Another child born, time moves so fast As each generation came to be Mother and child came to me I was there in the sun so warm A sense of serenity after the storm They came to me with love and tears Seeing many emotions throughout those years Times have changed, progress to blame Many things different but a few are the same Like the seasons changing, one to another And the bond that exists between child and mother There’s another child on the way I’ll still be here As I was for generations Year after year after year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/4/2009 9:11:00 AM
Dear Vincent - Congratulations on your WIN in Deborah's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Vince Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/3/2009 8:49:00 PM
Vince I love this poem for it takes me home to my grandmothers rocker every time i read it - Congratulations on placing in Deborah's contest - God Bless you and the family Vince - Your friend, mj
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:05:00 PM
Vince, congrats! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on yopur win in Debbie's contest, Vince! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/2/2009 10:32:00 AM
That was excellent Vince. "A sense of serenity after the storm" That was my favorite line.
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:21:00 AM
Warmest congrats Vince on your excellent win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/2/2009 7:02:00 AM
This was one of my favorites in the contest! Congratulations Vince, on being among the winning poems! Well deserved!~ Carrie
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Date: 2/28/2009 2:58:00 AM
I love the contrast between tragedy and love and gifts combined with the imagery and return to the overall initial message of life overall - seen from the view of a rocking chair. Excellent write. Randy
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Date: 2/27/2009 3:57:00 AM
no words. this is so very, very, special. i loved it. janetta.
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Date: 2/23/2009 9:43:00 AM
Very, very nice LVince. I wish I had writte it. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your remarks on my featured poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/22/2009 7:48:00 AM
I am very partial to rocking chairs. In fact, I am wishing I wrote this. : ) You did such a beautiful job. The Personification aspect is brilliant as I find myself feeling extremely emotional towards this chair. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/21/2009 3:45:00 AM
nicely done... beautifully described! best wishes... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/21/2009 12:14:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your blog comment
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Date: 2/20/2009 1:03:00 PM
this is exceptionally wonderful!... the old chair has truly seen a lot..lol...nice work n ever so much thanx for ur wonderful comment on my poem" I AM"....Maryam*
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Date: 2/20/2009 11:50:00 AM
This is beautiful Vince. A story rich with imagery and history. There is a special quality to the rocking chair, I think. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/20/2009 11:23:00 AM
a Great read well penned my friend :)
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Date: 2/20/2009 8:50:00 AM
Hi Vince how have you and the family been - i hope that all is well - I just loved this poem it reminded me of my Grandmothers rocker - I used to stand on the rockers behind her and once she forgot that I was there and stood up which sent me flying backwards and I bit my tongue in half - Excellent poem Vince - Best regards - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/19/2009 10:55:00 AM
Vince, beautiful poem! It really hit home for me. I had a dying friend who was searching for an antique rocker for the mother of her new grandson. I had one, and it was precious to me -- filled with memories. But I was delighted I could fulfill Jeanett's need before she passed. Wonderful, Wonderful! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2009 10:13:00 AM
yes that prety much how it goes year after year after year. nice writing. John
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Date: 2/18/2009 1:59:00 PM
Vince What a heart- felt write nice use of personification nothing like old chairs! good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 2/18/2009 11:14:00 AM
This is awesome and surely a winner. Good luck in the contest!! Love "as each generation came to be Mother and child came to me". There is nothing like a rocking chair for pregnancy and then the new born!! Beautifully done, Vince!!
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Date: 2/18/2009 7:22:00 AM
I shouldn't tell you I loved it. Debbie
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Date: 2/17/2009 2:24:00 PM
Smile~I loved this soulful and passion filled write of tender love my dear Brother!!!" ~"Hello Vincent Suzadail Jr. & All Your Loves!!!" What a wonderfully constucted and flowing personification ~filled with soo much compassionately and heart-felt love & hope!!!~Soft, tender & gentle it was~exposing the true heart of its writer I believe~"A Beautiful Heart & Soul!!!"~"My Love Always To You & Your Loves Vincent, Forever, John!":)
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:43:00 AM
This is just great..perfect idea and well expressed. This is a winner. BG
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