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The Old House

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The Old House

An old house

Move swiftly when passing by

Windows like eyes see

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel

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  1. Date: 3/3/2011 8:19:00 AM
    There's something quite "haunting" about these old houses, Sharon. I love the way you describe how its windows are watching us. Excellent work! So good to be back home and reading your wonderful poetry again. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 5:15:00 PM
    heck of a Haiku, Sharon. Think to the tune of "twilight zone " ....Eerie walking past those empty abodes .... It does feel like someone or ..."thing" watching you !

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 10:21:00 AM
    Sharon I enjoyed the feelings you conjured up with this write of yours.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 11:51:00 PM
    wow, I really love the feeling this one gives.

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 8:43:00 PM
    I can suddenly hear that old song from the fifties as I read this impressive entry.

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 5:50:00 PM
    Nice visual of the old house, Sharon